The orc Aweena

[Aweena]

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Aweena a young orc just started her training in Durotar first figting some boars to improve her streangth and then helping out the villagers later she traveled to the near by sen'jin village meeting a exausted peon on the way she took up his burden and prommised to travel to razorhill soon after this she meet up with the villagers of sen'jin here she learnd off a evil troll named zalazar she promised to get rid of this evil and headed to razor hill delivering messages on the way and gaining in streangth still by the harsh enviroment on the way killing scorpids,

finally in razor hill she delivered the peons burden and got rewarded for her work by the inn keeper she decided now she was there that she would stay for a while and rented a bed soon she took off again to do her missions she had taken up on the way thinking she still needed some time before meeting this evil troll she took out to gather some eggs for the resident cook also collecting some pelts for the trolls in senjin

this was the first day out side the vally of trials and she decided to sleep under the stars thinking to her self this is a nice life in the open wilds she finally drifted off to sleep.

Continuing this as i lvl aweena on bloodhoof

[Aweena]

The next morning Aweena was awakend by a scream not a orc or troll or any other race she knew no this was the scream of a boar in pain she rushed to see what this was ready to go in for a kill to bring back some meat

when she reatched the sounds source she saw somthing that changed her mind an old boar grey and scared was fending off some scorpids his long time mate lying dead behind him Aweena rushed in and helpd the old guy scorpids fell and the last fled the boar then humped back to his mate and sank to the ground Aweena aproatched carefully the boar hardly looked at her but semed to be giving up figthing Aweena sank to her knees next to the boar and found a few bandages in her backpack started tending the boar he rose his head only once and looked at her with mild thankfull eyes and they semed to have a conection,

After the boar had gaind in strength Aweena took off again leaving him in the care of the stabelmaster in razorhill Aweena had now chosen her path in life she would become a hunter at balance with nature finishing off the tasks she had picked up she went to face this evil trill Zalazar using a new tecnique she had learnd she finished him off quikly even with the strong black magic he possesed finishing her task by handing over his head to the villagers off senjin she went back to razorhill to learn more about taming beasts for companions in the hunt,

picking up the boar from the stabel master again finally at full strength she took off to orgrimma meeting up with a hunter from her new clan they planned to go searching for a beast from an old myth a big white bear in the far away lands of dun morogh Aweena decided to tag along maybe she could learn somthing as the hunter was more exspariensed than her self,
Stereoptic was this hunters name they took a long jurney getting to know one another they finally reatched the Lands of the dwarfs dun morogh going in they meet ice claw bears and a few mountaneirs soon they came across the bear from the myths and stereoptic started gaining his trust Aweena didnt quite feel the same draw to the Big white beast but did see his powers while stereoptic was gaining the beasts trust Aweenas Boar ran in to a pretty female falling in love again Aweena couldent bring her self to keep him from this so she let him go after this she went off to exsplore the area a bit and almost rumbled in to a young black bear the bear didnt really care bout her mutch he was bussy stealing honey from a camp dwarfs had abandoned

sitting down Aweena watched the bear sniffing araund and thougth he is yound and new to the world kinda like me Aweena reatched in to her backpack picking up a chese the bear raised his head and sniffed the air then moved twoards her not agressivly but curious she handed him the chese he ate it fast and then sniffed her for more unknowingly Aweena had befriended the bear by her gesture and he followed her for a while she then decided to name him and gain his trust more feeding him she said Bobo he nodded and this was now his new name, Meeting up with Stereoptic they decided it was time to go home once at home Aweena heard a story from some of the elders a Cat special and gracefull but the only place they lived were in the hostile area of the nigth elfs one particular cat was mentioned duskstalker said to have spots shining like the stars and a silvery coat like the nigth sky Aweena listent for a while and then decided she would seek out this cat a dangerous jurney so she askd her friend stereoptic to join her once more they set off and snuk tru darnassus a dangerous place finally getting tru they meet the strange sabers but none of them were what Aweena was looking for going further she finally discovered what she had looked for in a beam of silver ligth duskstalker was walking gracefully shining like the stars Aweena aproatched carefully and started talking softly to the saber gaining his trust it took her a while but finally the beast came to her he sniffed her bag and she remebered the fish she had brougth for the jurney she took one out and gave it to him he span happily and she patted his big head and off home they went

This is how Aweena meet her first friend and gained her first companions for hunting.

continue later

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