Feed back on stories

[Aweena]

http://forums.wow-petopia.com/viewtopic.php?f=4&t=217

since stories are flourishing here i thougth we need some feedback on em so making this tread to ask people to comment how could we make a story better are we in line with lore

hell even recuest not to be mentioned in stories or be mentioned

rules: follow forum rules first of all
be constructive in your comments
support the creativiti dont put it down we want people to keep writing and get better and learn yes ?
link /quote the parts your talking about dont quote entire texts some are huge walls
remeber not evryone is english speaking by nature so typos gramma mistakes and so on ignore em

And most important off all keep being nice !

[Aweena]

bump

[Vespias]

Agree...for instance, y'all are being too polite on my submission An unfinished Work...seriously, I want feedback even if it's negative. I know what I have to do to it still but more ideas would not hurt.

[Saturo]

Your story sucked. I couldn't possibly hate it more...

Seriously tough, I like it, and I dont really have anything negative to say. It's good fanfic, that's all.

[Vespias]

lol...there ya go.

[Karathyriel]

I think that is the problem...
People who like your work will tell you so.
People who don't won't say that.

I'm pretty sure that is why Mania never gave any comment on my Tiragarde Keep, although she is half responsible for that...

No, really... It would be nice to get some "you could do better here, here and here".
Why didn't anyone complain about me absolutely forgetting to describe Boktor?

[Saturo]

I'm gonna complain here.

You completely forgot to describe Boktor.

[Karathyriel]

Saturo, some day I'm gonna strangle you.

Not today, not tomorrow, probably not even next week.

But some day, I will.