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Kirrandria: I personally love the outfit he's currently wearing. The original head gear would probably look best on a white/lighter colored/appareled dragon imho. :)

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I like the first one too, but maybe with the cobwebs from the second one! I love how the tan ones match his toes.

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Trying out a new bio design.. yet again.. here are two arcane dragons.. which bio look do you like best?

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I like the first one (Jack) the most, for sure!

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Which bio template is best?

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I want to know which you like best and why. Do you like my hatchery logo over the pair and their color logo? Do you like the catfish and the one column text over the two columns text and no catfish? Do you have another idea for a template? Let me know :D I am trying to build a better template so I appreciate your advice.

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LupisDarkmoon wrote:I like the first one (Jack) the most, for sure!
I agree! :D I think I like it because it's less 'busy' and flows better. <3

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This time I like the second (hatchling) one best!It has all the features I loved of Jack's, but I think including the breeding pair colors was a great move, as it immediately catches the eye and gives all sorts of good information without needing to click the hatchery link (which I didn't immediately realize was a link) and scroll through. It sounds silly, but loading one extra webpage can be all it takes to deter people from being interested. It looks great!

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I like Jack's, because of the catfish creature. Also, if poor little RandomTest needs a home when she is done being a profile model, I'll take her when you're done with her.
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Thanks for your feedback Heh the catfish is cute, might be able to work it in somewhere else :D.. I send RandomTest over to you when Im done with the bio templating ! :D

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Wrote Jacks Bio

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let me know what you think! :D

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Tårnfalk: There's a few minor issues to correct:
  • Jack's name needs to be centered
  • There should be a space between your first paragraph and your second "always the outsider." and "Jack were born". (Unless that's meant to be the same paragraph, then I'd recommend taking out the enter between the two sentences.
  • A few grammar errors as well. Such as "Jack were born" should be "Jack was born". I could help you proof read that if you'd like? But that's entirely up to you. :D
Other than those small items, I think his new bio looks great! :D

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I'm debating which dragon to keep and could use some help! Which do you guys think looks better/matches better? The first dragon or the second?

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Prof read is more than welcome! ! Name can't sadly not be centered in this template for some reason .
Oddly enough I like the darker green better aka the first one. ! Soooo lovely!

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I like the second, it most closely matches the wing edges.
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Tårnfalk wrote:Prof read is more than welcome! ! Name can't sadly not be centered in this template for some reason .
Oddly enough I like the darker green better aka the first one. ! Soooo lovely!
Alright! I'll try to make time later today to proof read it and send you any changes in a PM. As for spacing, have you tried this method:
[ color=transparent].........[ /color]
Without the space after the [. Put as many .'s as you need before your word until it aligns the way you want it to. This also works to indent paragraphs, etc. It's a handy trick. :D
I also use this trick to hide how much I paid for my dragons in their bios. You can only see if it you highlight over it. That way I can always check if I forget, but others can't just see it unless they know where/how to look. ;)

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Yeah, Ash, I actually like the first one more too! I like the light green in concept, but the blue part of the capsule really throws me.

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This girl needs a new name :D Suggestions are welcome :D

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No magic/demon/spirit/ghost/witch etc names (you know my preferences by know i think :mrgreen: )

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Ibis ( a type of bird indigenous to swamps)
Zizania ( a wild rice that grows in swamps)
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Thanks Syleye. I took the second name :hug:

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I need some help.. I am trying to make the color wheel of fr match more in the color palette of eachother.. It SOOO bugs my eye to have such different shades next to each other e.g. antique and moon are more grayish than white. Sanddollar, flaxen and ivory are all lighter than goldenrod, honey and lemon etc.

I want to do something which matches the paint card you get for your house.. Like this

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The old color wheel and some work I already done.. but I am not happy with it.. still to much gradiant from one to another

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and if possible include more colors in to it like these in this suggestion:

http://www1.flightrising.com/forums/sug/2525136

I want to help the thread out by making a more color coordinated color wheel of fr.. with a list of colors who are missing so the artist can see that we could use even more new colors :D

HELP! :mrgreen: :lol:

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Something like the one here?

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I'm not sure about adding the new colours personally but I can give it a shot.

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