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[Varethyn]

I am most definitely still working hard on the comic I promised before. But it is going very, very slowly as slotting posts together, in the right order and in an understandable flow is quite time consuming Also I get distracted. By that I mean I'm still half-way through reading the story as is and can't help those "OMG Must draw!" moments that pop up.

Little bit of nitty-gritty: I am NOT a professional comic artist, so yes it will be messy, yes there will be mistakes and yes my handwriting is atrocious This is a rough piece but I'm pleased with the results. Though it is also a bit of "Am I doing it right?" in terms of human-Kozri. I just let the pencil wander while drawing him :B



Best. First attempt at Zaruuk. Ever. :3 Also, I showed this to my little brother. His reply? "That poor cake." Huh.

Couple of links for the posts this is based on:
Original post.
OOC comment for the last panel.

[Lupis]

Pfahahahahah, Zaruuk looks epic! Looking great so far - my only critique is human anatomy. Our arms typically are long enough to have our fingers reach the middle of our thighs.

[Varethyn]

Yeah I've always been awkward with arms, bent or straight. Roughs ftw, I'll just keep working at it, thanks :3
Glad you like how Zar came out

[Moonlost]

This... this is amazing. I laughed and caused my cat to stare at me strangely.
Zaruuk now must add cake-destructo-laser-beams to his list of abilities. XD

[Chimera]

My cat ran out my room when i read this (and i havent even followed the RP >_>;;), this is so awesome its hilarious xD i loves it <3

[TygerDarkstorm]

Oh my, I got quite the laugh out of this, thanks Varethyn.

[Kamalia]

*Gigglesnorts*

Zaruuk came out really good, nice job!
As for anatomy stuff, all I can suggest is looking at tutorials on DA (I especially recommend this one), searching reference pics (Eg "Guy jumping") or just posing in front of a mirror if you're stuck on poses or if the anatomy looks a bit wonky. It helps a bit if you're ever stuck.

[Azunara]

Human anatomy is not my strong point, no help there.

However, Koz looks pretty much as I imagined him. Yay for simple characters! And I remember that scene, and the scenes that followed. Poor pirates, losing their stuff.

[Serendipity82]

*snickers. That certainly gave me a good laugh and this just makes it better. Love it!

I do not know why I didn't see it earlier XD.

[Varethyn]

While I worry for your pets I'm glad you all got a good laugh out of it

@Moon: *pats the cat reassuringly* He should. This was fun to draw
@Xakaal: *also offers comforting scritches to the cat* Good to know ^_^ You should check out the rest of the story; it's good reading
@Tyger: No, no, thank you and the other RPers for inspiring me ^_^d
@Kam: Ooh, nice! Thanks for that, it'll come in very useful *Glares at her mannequins with disdain*
@Azu: No worries And woo, I got him right! *happy*
@Seren: *points at title* I is sneakeh :3