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Re: LF Advice Thread

Unread post by Tårnfalk » Sun Jan 12, 2020 11:32 am

Thank you for the feedback! I changed back to the first one. Was afraid it was too grainy/blurry to make out what it said :D

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Unread post by Syleye » Sun Jan 12, 2020 11:40 am

I prefer the first as well

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Unread post by Tårnfalk » Sun Jan 12, 2020 11:55 am

Added a link to the ODCA (Old Dragons Collectors Assisosiation) to the first signature

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should I leave that and just have my hatchery?

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Unread post by GormanGhaste » Sun Jan 12, 2020 12:12 pm

I would just suggest putting more space between them to make it more visually obvious that they're two different things.
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Unread post by Tårnfalk » Sun Jan 12, 2020 12:27 pm

yeah sadly no room for that .. so just going to leave it out.. thanks for the feedback both of you :D

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Re: LF Advice Thread

Unread post by Tårnfalk » Wed Jan 22, 2020 9:04 am

Change my hatchery logo into something a bit more simple, plain and easier to read

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let me know what you think

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Unread post by Syleye » Wed Jan 22, 2020 12:23 pm

I like it

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Unread post by Varethyn » Sun Feb 02, 2020 7:37 am

As few people seem happy/comfortable posting in my Pinkerlocke threads and so I can't tell if it's being read I'm dropping this in here.

What do you guys look for in an episodic story? I'm always looking for ways to improve which is why I'm always asking for feedback. In another story I've been reading someone mentioned not being able to keep focus if the chapter is too long, over 2000 words or something like that. I do tend to get carried away if an idea bites me, so do you guys prefer longer or shorter chapters? And how about the non-story posts - do you like seeing them as their own or consolidated in with a story post with a blurb at the end explaining what happened? I want my 'lockes to be as comfortable and interesting to read as I can make them.

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Unread post by Tårnfalk » Sun Feb 02, 2020 8:35 am

Huh I could have sworn I had pressed submit

Oki here goes:


I like the non story post :D Fun to see what you are doing

as for the story:

I like to see some more discovery "missions" where your party/dragons find out/explore/discover new items/new races/new areas (Think Legends of Zelda, Myst). How do they catalog/identify it? And how will it help/hinder them in their overall mission/goals?

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