LF Advice Thread

[Ana]

Thank you for the feedback! I changed back to the first one. Was afraid it was too grainy/blurry to make out what it said

[Syleye]

I prefer the first as well

[Ana]

Added a link to the ODCA (Old Dragons Collectors Assisosiation) to the first signature

should I leave that and just have my hatchery?

[GormanGhaste]

I would just suggest putting more space between them to make it more visually obvious that they're two different things.

[Ana]

yeah sadly no room for that .. so just going to leave it out.. thanks for the feedback both of you

[Ana]

Change my hatchery logo into something a bit more simple, plain and easier to read

let me know what you think

[Syleye]

I like it

[Varethyn]

As few people seem happy/comfortable posting in my Pinkerlocke threads and so I can't tell if it's being read I'm dropping this in here.

What do you guys look for in an episodic story? I'm always looking for ways to improve which is why I'm always asking for feedback. In another story I've been reading someone mentioned not being able to keep focus if the chapter is too long, over 2000 words or something like that. I do tend to get carried away if an idea bites me, so do you guys prefer longer or shorter chapters? And how about the non-story posts - do you like seeing them as their own or consolidated in with a story post with a blurb at the end explaining what happened? I want my 'lockes to be as comfortable and interesting to read as I can make them.

[Ana]

Huh I could have sworn I had pressed submit

Oki here goes:


I like the non story post Fun to see what you are doing

as for the story:

I like to see some more discovery "missions" where your party/dragons find out/explore/discover new items/new races/new areas (Think Legends of Zelda, Myst). How do they catalog/identify it? And how will it help/hinder them in their overall mission/goals?

hope this make sense

[Ana]

I Need new breeding cards as I am again not satisfied with what I got

Previous :



new attempt (too big) :



I need something simpler and easy to change when i switch pairs and genes around..

help needed

[GormanGhaste]

I have no experience making these, but my feedback is that I find the circular color ranges confusing--well, maybe confusing is too strong a word....non-obvious at first glance? I'm all about immediate clarity.

[GormanGhaste]

Oh, anyone have pricing advice for this one? I haven't sold any primals before.

[Ana]

Around 55k i would say but check the ah

[Syleye]

45-55k seems right

[GormanGhaste]

ty!

[Ana]

Decided to do a simpler and smaller version of my breeding cards as Im prob the only one who sees and uses them anyway

https://www1.flightrising.com/forums/ba ... t_36634839

what do you guys think so far?

[GormanGhaste]

I like them! And with the names separate from the breeding card, you can even add links to their dragon page if you wish.

[Ana]

Uhh good idea! Thank you

[Ana]

Part of my lair makeover is making new names and pairs. I have a tattoo artist pair and I know I want the females name to be Ink. What should I name the male? Should relate to tattooing in someway like Ink does


Needle is the name of one of my tailors so thats a no go..

[GormanGhaste]

This article has a glossary of Japanese tattoo terms. Sumi is the kind of ink they use in traditional tattoos.