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A Rebirth

Posted: Tue Mar 09, 2010 6:43 pm
by Nevar
(Since Nevar has since bcome a night elf, I figured I needed a story to justify it so here it goes :) )

Nevar climbed the rocky mountain side of Bloodmyst isle chaos and destruction all around her, blood elvs driven mad by Kael'thas - willing to sacrifice it all for an eredar and its power. Gotham by her side and her friend Kaleos accompying her not far behind. She glanced towards the top and saw blood elf bodies and fire everywhere and heard a booming voice proclaiming herself queen of all eredar. She charged towards the top and saw a small blood elven boy huddled between the bodies of his two dead parents crying loudly as the eredar mad her way towards him. Nevar signaled Gotham and her charged the huge beast jumping on her back tearing into her, Nevar shot arrow after arrow at the eredars back and was determined to save the child. Suddenly Gotham was flung against the rocky wall and fell breathing heavily - Nevar watched with tear filled eyes as her friend fell broken before her. Driven blind by rage and sorrow Nevar quickened the pace as the eredar stalked towards her, she heard the voice of the small boy crying in her mind and Kaleos screaming for her to hold on. She too was knocked against the rocky wall and fell beside her friend she reached out with her last bit of strength and pulled his broken body to her as everything went black.

Kaleos stood triumphant over the dead beast and looked towards his fallen friend as tears welled up in his eyes, a death knight was not supposed to show emtion but he did..he truely cared for her. He slowly walked over to Nevars body and glanced at the small elven boy kneeling beside her and as brushed her hair out of her eyes and sobbed. "She saved me..she gave everything to save me." tears ran down Kaleos cheeks as he gathered Nevar's body in his arms and instructed his ghoul to pick up Gotham. "Come boy, what is your name?" "Its Raife." the small boy replied. "Well Raife we are going to go to the only place I know that can help..we are going to my former home...Darnassus." Raife and Kaleos made thier way to Darnassus and were greated hostiley at the gates "Please..." pled Kaleos "We are just seeking help from the Priestess Whisperwind..for my friend..she died with honor protecting this small boy, she risked everything and paid the price for one who was unlike her." The elves parted and they made thier way to the temple of the moon with Tyrande suprisingly waiting for them at the entrance. "Kaleos my former child I know what has happened Elune spoke to me of it and has urged me to help you any way I can." she said as she took the limp draenei from his arms and carried her over to the moonwell. "What are you going to do?" he asked "Lay the wolf in the water with Nevar" she said her eyes sparkling. He obeyed her command and waited. "While I cannot repair a broken body I may ask Elune to transfer thier souls into healthy bodies..bodies that will serve them well." she replied and kneeled down calling all of her priestess's to pray. She urged Kaleos and Raife do the same, Kaleos watched with wonder as voices filled the room and Nevar and Gothams body began to sparkle and transform. Nevar was becoming a night elf long flowing wite hair and light skin..blade tattoo's etched across her face and Gotham becoming stronger..more muscular with fur as white as the moon. Kaleos eyes widened as he recognized the two shapes..they were the forms of Tyramune and Moonblazer the huntress of legend and her loyal companion. He gasped at Tyrande.."I thought they were simply legends?" "Sometimes Elune suprises us and gifts the worthy with great power" anwsered the priestess.

Nevar opened her eyes her subconscious mind told her what had happened as she heard a soothing voice whispering to her "You are reborn, I have granted you my highest honor and gift - a loyal and kind soul who can love those who need her most." She opened her new glowing eyes and stared in awe as Gotham beside her shook the water from his no longer diseased coat - she smiled at the elves around her who had saved her and given her a new home. She saw Kelos kneeling and ran from the moonwell to hi burying her face in his neck and crying. "I thought I lost you." they told each other at the exact same time and then laughed shortly. Nevar didnt know what she would do if she lost her dearest non-wolf friend and then it hit her "The child!?" she cried. "I'm...here." said Raife in a small voice peeking from behind Kaleos. Nevar dropped to one knee and held out her arms as Raife ran into them and buried his face in her neck "You saved me, you didnt care that im not like you...I love you." Raife cried. "There there little one." Nevar soothed, this child meant the world to her all ready and she could not bear to part with him. "Let me stay with you, be my mother..please." Raife sniffed "I'm only 7 but..I can help you..I can be strong, I can learn just dont send me away." "I would never dream of it." Nevar smiled as she picked up the child and gathered him in her arms, soon he was fast asleep resting his head on her shoulder and she stroked his tiny back. Never looked at Kaleos and then at Gotham and finally at the sleeping Raife and smiled, she truely was gifted and had a feeling this was only the beginning for her and her friends.

Hope you like it :)

Re: A Rebith

Posted: Tue Mar 09, 2010 7:24 pm
by RandiFeymar
Wow, very nice! I like how you made a very dramatic story to go along with your race change. I'm beginning to really enjoy people's WoW stories. It's inspiring me to write my own some day. ^.^

Re: A Rebith

Posted: Tue Mar 09, 2010 7:25 pm
by Vephriel
Lovely story! I really enjoy your writing. I agree with Randi, we have so many talented people here, it's so nice to read these wonderful depictions of everyone's characters. ^^

Re: A Rebith

Posted: Tue Mar 09, 2010 7:27 pm
by Helio
Everyone needs to start writing! :)

Re: A Rebith

Posted: Tue Mar 09, 2010 7:28 pm
by Nevar
Haha, I'm really blushing - thank you both! :) When an idea hits me I cannot help but write about it

Re: A Rebith

Posted: Tue Mar 09, 2010 7:29 pm
by Nevar
I do not play on a role-playing server but I'd like to at times, Kaleos is based on a friend of mine and I always wished you could adopt children in WoW if you could I'd get a small blood elf boy as they just capture my heart with thier big green eyes and huge feet - quite cute :)

Re: A Rebith

Posted: Tue Mar 09, 2010 7:51 pm
by Kaleos
Very nice! Always knew you had a gift for writing.

That Kaleos part ..very touching. *wipes a tear*

Re: A Rebith

Posted: Tue Mar 09, 2010 7:52 pm
by Nevar
...speak of the devil and he will appear <3 lol

Re: A Rebith

Posted: Tue Mar 09, 2010 9:12 pm
by Azunara
Aaaaw! Awesome! I loved it!

You all make me want to write. I will, soon. Soon as I think of an idea...

Re: A Rebith

Posted: Tue Mar 09, 2010 10:35 pm
by Nevar
Aww ty =D

Re: A Rebith

Posted: Wed Mar 10, 2010 11:56 am
by Rhyela
This was a very touching story, I love it!!! Great way to describe a race-change, too. (Night elves are awesome, anyway...though draenei are really cool also) :headbang:

Re: A Rebith

Posted: Sun Mar 21, 2010 11:38 pm
by Nevar
Thank you again! :)

Re: A Rebith

Posted: Mon Mar 22, 2010 12:41 am
by Kaleos
Waiting on more. would love to hear more. :D

Re: A Rebith

Posted: Mon Mar 22, 2010 10:45 am
by Helio
I love your writing, keep it up...Maybe even turn into a blood elf..you know you want to..lol

Re: A Rebith

Posted: Mon Mar 22, 2010 6:56 pm
by Nevar
/blush at Helio, thank you haha but I am night elf for life! (at least until worgen <.< ) hehe ^_^

Re: A Rebith

Posted: Mon Mar 22, 2010 8:06 pm
by Azunara
Ha! For the Alliance! For Elune!

Azunara: "For the kittens! ...What?"

Really though...more please!

Re: A Rebith

Posted: Mon Mar 22, 2010 9:17 pm
by Nevar
Yay! :)

Re: A Rebirth

Posted: Mon Mar 22, 2010 9:24 pm
by Kaleos
Moar plz! Use the Un'Goro stuff ...you know you want to, with a little editing of course :D

Re: A Rebirth

Posted: Mon Mar 22, 2010 9:28 pm
by Nevar
Haha, thats your story Kal :) Maybe you should tell it

Re: A Rebirth

Posted: Mon Mar 22, 2010 9:58 pm
by Kaleos
Technically I'm not a hunter though, shhh it's a secret though >.>