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Test-run: Esressa's Diary (Image Heavy)

Posted: Wed Apr 20, 2011 10:17 am
by Bubbleme
Dear Diary,

Esressa Basilik, here. I am sincerely glad I got the chance to write another entry. When we crashed, I barely held back tears. Honestly, I believed we were to die. Dad gave me his prized pet to start my training out - Seraline; I didn’t get the chance back in Draenor.
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We met one of the few survivors. Seemingly, his voice was full of courage and sounded familiar. Ah well. Me and Seraline were sent down to the camp where all the survivors lurked, while our new homeland was being rebuilt. – It still is as I write this, Infact.
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As we got to the camp, one of those caster-things was waiting for us. He spoke of how lucky we were to have survived; for Mother, Brother and my own partner (boyfriend … don’t ask.) had not. Yet my task for survival had still not finished. I was sent to kill some Moths and collect their blood in small vials.
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Seraline was a hard hitter. Moths were not an easy kill, however. She seemed unwilling to kill her own kind, and simply fluttered her wings stubbornly, standing (or floating) silently with her back turnt on me. Eventually she agreed, though. Nonetheless, it was extremely messy. She still respected me despite the blood all over my skin!
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When we returned, the man held out a stack of vials and placed them into my arms. I was confused at first, but when he nudged me back to head off, I could tell that we had a delivery to make! First, someone else wished to greet us.

Botanix Taerix was waiting for us at the other side of the ship, arms open to take the delivery and carefully place it down. She explained how she needed to kill some of these Mutations, as her experiments on them were not verified safe.
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So off we went. Sera had no trouble in destroying these, happily striking along as we hopped off. She really liked helping out in combat, and would brush her wings against me every time we killed something. Awwh.
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Soon enough, we were back to tell Taerix the good news. She squealed in delight and gave me a hug once I’d explained to her. It seemed clear to me and Sera that this was the start of heroism. Or was it? Carrying vials like a post-woman to other survivors? No.

Anyway. Me and Sera headed off to see Zalduun, the Priest at the Crash site. He saved me, and basically healed all the survivors to full health. I respect him heavily. He told us to save one of the survivors. Dad. Dad must have been nearby when the ship crashed.
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We spoke to some other people, whom gave us other tasks which I can explain to you later. *Smiley face*
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Thusly, me and Sera were off. Together, to find dad. We looked high and low, left and right. Then, Sera saw someone with their leg stuck in the air – or scented them. We both inquisitively dashed over, and then I saw him--her?
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The light pulsated from within me, circled my body and forced itself beaming into Mum! Her legs pulled her up, wrapping her arms around me in a hug. I remember her saying how doomed she felt, how lost and lonely. But we’d found her. Now we just had an easy task.
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Zalduun provided us with good reward. He’d always said I could be a medic when I was older. But time will tell, nonetheless.
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Esressa Basilik xx

Re: Test-run: Esressa's Diary (Image Heavy)

Posted: Wed Apr 20, 2011 11:46 am
by Varethyn
Yay, another pet journal!
Good start, Seraline's cute :)

Re: Test-run: Esressa's Diary (Image Heavy)

Posted: Wed Apr 20, 2011 2:51 pm
by TygerDarkstorm
It's nice seeing more of these pop up. :)
Good job. Only little nitpick I have is that Draenei typically don't have last names, but it's not as if she's going to be using it all the time and I imagine it's player's choice. I look forward to more. :D

Re: Test-run: Esressa's Diary (Image Heavy)

Posted: Wed Apr 20, 2011 2:55 pm
by Bubbleme
Thanks :) I'm thinking of develloping it into more of a mainly text-based diary, with a sketch of her and her pet when she gets a new one. I'm waiting until I have enough excouragement, for now.