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First attempt at a signature

Posted: Fri Jul 29, 2011 7:32 pm
by Kurenio
So this is literally the first time I've ever used photoshop. I did this completely out of boredom while camping madexx, and ended up liking doing it. So.... How did I do? How can I improve?

Also I wanted to use the riding worg pet, but WMV doesn't show it right for some reason so I did the unarmored version.

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Second go at it. (with suggestion from veph)

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Third go at it. (with suggestion from kalli)

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Second attempt at a signature (for my peace loving little draenei hunter ^.^)

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Re: First attempt at a signature

Posted: Fri Jul 29, 2011 9:36 pm
by Kurenio
The more I look at the more I think its not horrible. Though I still think I'm bad heh.

Re: First attempt at a signature

Posted: Fri Jul 29, 2011 9:41 pm
by Vephriel
Nice work! :) My only critiques might be that the characters are a little hard to differentiate from the background. Some shadowing behind may fix this, or a backdrop that's a bit lighter. I'd recommend a pale shade for the font as well, the black is hard to make out against the dark. Perhaps a pale gold colour taken from your weapon to match? I like borders on signatures, but that's just my personal preference since I like the finished look it gives edges. ^^

Re: First attempt at a signature

Posted: Fri Jul 29, 2011 9:46 pm
by Kurenio
Most of that stuff I'm not sure how to do, but with my current interest in this it's time to pull up some youtube tutorials on cs5.

Re: First attempt at a signature

Posted: Fri Jul 29, 2011 10:14 pm
by Kurenio
My second go at it after watching a few tutorials

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Looks much better to me.

Re: First attempt at a signature

Posted: Fri Jul 29, 2011 10:15 pm
by Vephriel
Looking good! :)

Re: First attempt at a signature

Posted: Fri Jul 29, 2011 10:19 pm
by Kurenio
Thanks a lot for the suggestions.

Re: First attempt at a signature

Posted: Sat Jul 30, 2011 12:50 am
by Serenith
Yeah that second one is much better, I really like the background you chose. Its neat :D

Re: First attempt at a signature

Posted: Sat Jul 30, 2011 1:04 am
by Kalliope
The second one is definitely a huge improvement on the first (which looked pretty good to begin with)! Maybe try a lighter outline (white, yellow?) for the hunter/pets?

Re: First attempt at a signature

Posted: Sat Jul 30, 2011 1:23 am
by Kurenio
Serenith wrote:Yeah that second one is much better, I really like the background you chose. Its neat :D
Thanks!
Kalliope wrote:The second one is definitely a huge improvement on the first (which looked pretty good to begin with)! Maybe try a lighter outline (white, yellow?) for the hunter/pets?
I'll Give it a go, and see what it looks like.

Re: First attempt at a signature

Posted: Sat Jul 30, 2011 1:32 am
by Kurenio
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Hows this look?

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Second attempt at a signature for a different hunter of mine.

Re: First attempt at a signature

Posted: Sat Jul 30, 2011 2:45 am
by Kalliope
Definitely pops more! :D

Re: First attempt at a signature

Posted: Sat Jul 30, 2011 3:43 pm
by Serenith
Yup, it def pulls her away from the busy background (busy but cool!) <3