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A Farewell and a Welcome - a short story
Posted: Wed Aug 03, 2011 11:26 pm
by Nahale
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Re: A Farewell and a Welcome - a short story
Posted: Thu Aug 04, 2011 1:06 am
by Lupis
I really like Nahale. And I really like how you're writing from his perspective through and through - that is, you incorporate the fact that Tauren use scent as a major sense, and might find some scents appealing that humans would find revolting.
Again, very well written! Loving all the details. (The cover of the Making Gold for Dummies book was great.)
Re: A Farewell and a Welcome - a short story
Posted: Thu Aug 04, 2011 2:50 am
by Nahale
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Re: A Farewell and a Welcome - a short story
Posted: Thu Aug 04, 2011 8:34 am
by Nefretiti
I echo what Lupis said
Nahale is great and his new friend seems really neat too, I cant wait to see their friendship develop
I just love Auri hehe her protectiveness towards him reminds me of my oldest pet Rak'Shiri , tamed at 57 back in vanilla and he's been with me since.
Re: A Farewell and a Welcome - a short story
Posted: Thu Aug 04, 2011 9:09 am
by Bubbleme
AWWWH AURI! She's just ... adorable ... Sorry, I just forgot what I was going to say!
--- Ah, I remember.
I love the plot of the story so far, and how you shown the scene to us rather than told us. Nahale is a great character in this particular story and I'm extremely intrigued to see what'll happen next.
- Tsami
Re: A Farewell and a Welcome - a short story
Posted: Thu Aug 04, 2011 6:51 pm
by Kylah
That was wonderful! I love Auri and Nahale's characters so far, and I can't wait to hear what's next
Re: A Farewell and a Welcome - a short story
Posted: Thu Aug 04, 2011 8:09 pm
by Nahale
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