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trying

Posted: Thu Aug 11, 2011 11:51 pm
by starkittens
ok so i'm a good (one of the best if not the best says most of the other people) writer in my school. (don't mind the spelling errors i'm only in 8th grade)
this is karoma's background story. i'm doing one on every rare spawn (and my ghost saber who was my lvling pet.


I was born into a prided worg family but i saw so many faults. we are slow and balky. we run so slowly all we catch for dinner are measly critters.
they are stupid they thing the travelers are friendly! they run up to them just to get killed and harvested! and they enjoy being one's "pet"! they snivel and follow one's orders with out complaining. they will even kill one of there one pack mates. even there best friend. but not me. i am slimmer. i am faster. i am smarter. i learned to take down a gryphon at the age of two months. when the travelers came i jumped on them and ravaged them. they tryed to take me as there one but i ripped them to shreds before the could even get to see my name! my pack was the best in the highlands! but then THEY came. the ripped my land apart. and then they found me. they were different then the rest that came. when i struck they stuck in bigger numbers. i quickly fell to there might. they took me away. my beautiful silky black fur the shredded and turned blue! i was outraged! i broke free of there chains and ran for freedom! and i took out as many as i could. my land was taken by them. the hour of twilight was upon me and i would never let them take me into the darkness! but there grip was strong. my will was not enough. as i ran i remembered the one thing my mom told me. "you are karoma. that means the wolf spirit in our tongue." that gave me the strength to get out of that evil corrupted place. but their curse was still upon me. they are still here in my land. and i want them out. i want all of them out! they shall know my name! i shall drive everyone from my land! no one shall escape my wrath! I AM KAROMA! i am the wolf spirit! and all shall fear me! this is my land!


that is what i have of karoma's story. i can post the little bit of skoll's story i have written if you guys want to read it....

Re: trying

Posted: Fri Aug 12, 2011 12:08 pm
by Sarantha
Sure, post it. I'll read anything! That was cute.

Re: trying

Posted: Sat Aug 13, 2011 1:40 am
by starkittens
ok i'm asking now that you guys (try) to post a comment. i would (love) the advice to help make my writing better (or the comments on how good it is :P)

Re: trying

Posted: Sat Aug 13, 2011 1:45 am
by starkittens
ok trying XueFang's story (that's my ghost saber from darkshore. my 1st pet (was made before cata) and my lving pet.



pride and glory. i love it. i am the night elf queen's precious pet. Elune's gift they call me. i am the shadow stalker at night and the beautiful ghost saber in the day. no mouse ever dared to come near my master's bed! none live with in a mile of my home. (all i can do tonight. more tomarrow)