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This one's about my troll, Sulaina, and her raptor, Sharptooth.

I walked across the deserted plains of Durotar, heat sweeping over me as I struggled over the sand oozing between my toes. Why am I here?
That is explained with the emptyness around me. I'm here to tame. I'd reached the Zepplin area outside Orgrimmar by the time the heat began to wear off as a slightly chilling wind blew over me. I turned around and began to follow the wind, eagur to see what is in store.
The light orange sand blew into my face as I walked to a river, managing to close my eyes in reflex. But as I opened my hazel eyes, I found something I thought was beautiful. A blood red raptor walked by the river, watching the crocolisks swim through. It had a yellow ring on one of its legs, and hadstrange markings on its side. This was the one.

That raptor noticed my staring, snarling in warning. I did nothing in reply, stupidly, and it charged at me and managed to leap on top of my stomache as I fell to the ground with a thud. I identifyed the raptor as a he. Rolling out of his grasp, I swiftly placed an icy, aqua blue trap onto the ground.
As he charged at me, the raptor got trapped in Ice upon stepping into my trap. As it broke free, I was under the raptor, pounced again. we rolled on the ground for several seconds, until he let go of me and stepped to the side, snorting softly and nodding in my general direction looking into my small, hazel eyes.
I'll name him Sharptooth, for now.

Just to let you know, Pawtrack inspired me.

Very nice little story, I only remember some of my characters "First pets" .. keep up the good work

Thanks! ^_^ your comment's really appreciated. Might write another story about my troll and post It in here.

Great story!

And I acctually inspired someone to write a story?! Wow!

Aww thanks!

Heres another one for you guys. Will continue it depending on if people like it or not.
Ignore the colour, I was adding some fun to it

A Trip To Mulgore PT 1
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Stepping up rounded steps, I was getting dizzy. God, when do these steps end?! Just as they did end, the Zepplin arrived. It was huge, rounded, almost a flying boat! ''Hear the! Hear the! The Zepplin to Mulgore 'as arrived! Free entry!'' yelled the goblin, I covered my ears as the voice boomed through my head... Ouch. I stepped onto the Zepplin, my blood red raptor Sharptooth following, the Zepplin taking off as soon as we did. Sitting on the ledge on the side of the Zepplin, I had my eyes glued to a BloodElve. He had long, black hair, and blueish greenish eyes, our eyes connecting, I was in space.. I began to slip.. Backwards..''Gah! M-Mon! HELP!'' I shrieked as I slipped over the edge, only my hands keeping me from falling. The elve rushed over and panicked. ''Take my hand!'' He shouted, as I did. We were now in the thunderbluff, we rushed off the Zepplin. I was tear-stained. ''What's the matter? Are you allright?'' The elve asked in a deep, soothing voice. ''I whas a-about to fall, mon. Ya' think Ahm a-allraight?'' I snapped. ''Calm down, you're safe now. Lets get you somewhere better.'' he mumbled, leading me into the center of thunderbluff, where the pond was. He sat me down, my pet following my movement. ''I'm Zerdas, you can call me Zer,'' he started. ''You?'' ''Ah be Sulaina. Yu can call meh..Sulai.'' I replied. ''Ah need tah sleep nawh. It be three in de' mornin' yah know.'' '' Me too.. See you tomorrow, Sulai.'' he ended, we walked to different inns. I snuggled up under blankets I brought, And slept the night away.

I sense a relationship evolving...

(Helpful critique; you may want to try writing filler-text. It was a bit jumpy/short.)