De Writin Contest (1000g prize) Finals
Posted: Sat Jun 19, 2010 10:34 pm
Rights Mons! I would like ta congratulate you on a very good contest. it was a tough call but de judges and I have narrowed down the field to a few choice lines. Wit out de furthering of adu dey are
Sarayana
2. Her smile faltered. "I disgust him," she realised, the pain as palpable as a whip across her face.
Kalliope
9. "I don't think that's what you're supposed to use pungent seal whey for," he said in disgust.
Nevar
12. Frantically she dug through the dirt - damp and black it clung underneath her now bleeding fingernails - her thoughts raced as she glanced skyward at the full moon. "Where is it!?" she whispered in a frenzy her eyes darting back and forth.. Then her nails scratched the wooden surface! Brushing the dirt away she looked down at the red cross engraved upon the front of the old coffin. Weathered and beaten it had laid in the cool ground for some time her eyes focused with glee "I found you..." she whispered in a haunting voice.
Makoes
17. That's never a good sound to here behind you, it's never a good sound to hear in front of you either. I wish I hadn't heard that sound...to late.
As Sarayana said dat she might not be able to post her storie I have included de top four selections ratha then de top 3... as for everyone else I wanna let ya know dat de next few entries were separated by less den 3 points, so a point here, a point dere and it coulda gon another way... ya alls did very well
Howeva given dat we were a bit slow off de mark I am extending de deadline for de finished stories to July 3rd (cause it not like we got anyting else going on around dat time neh?)
But get cracking ya four and remember, ya stories MUST start with de winning sentence ya presented. Once ya finished PM it ta my mailbox and on de 3rd I will post de stories on dis site for final judgeing by all de peoples
What ya still here? MOVE!
Sarayana
2. Her smile faltered. "I disgust him," she realised, the pain as palpable as a whip across her face.
Kalliope
9. "I don't think that's what you're supposed to use pungent seal whey for," he said in disgust.
Nevar
12. Frantically she dug through the dirt - damp and black it clung underneath her now bleeding fingernails - her thoughts raced as she glanced skyward at the full moon. "Where is it!?" she whispered in a frenzy her eyes darting back and forth.. Then her nails scratched the wooden surface! Brushing the dirt away she looked down at the red cross engraved upon the front of the old coffin. Weathered and beaten it had laid in the cool ground for some time her eyes focused with glee "I found you..." she whispered in a haunting voice.
Makoes
17. That's never a good sound to here behind you, it's never a good sound to hear in front of you either. I wish I hadn't heard that sound...to late.
As Sarayana said dat she might not be able to post her storie I have included de top four selections ratha then de top 3... as for everyone else I wanna let ya know dat de next few entries were separated by less den 3 points, so a point here, a point dere and it coulda gon another way... ya alls did very well
Howeva given dat we were a bit slow off de mark I am extending de deadline for de finished stories to July 3rd (cause it not like we got anyting else going on around dat time neh?)
But get cracking ya four and remember, ya stories MUST start with de winning sentence ya presented. Once ya finished PM it ta my mailbox and on de 3rd I will post de stories on dis site for final judgeing by all de peoples
What ya still here? MOVE!
*bows and scurries off*
And submitted!