Netherdrake

[Victorelle]

http://torame.deviantart.com/#/d33db5v can you tell me how I did? D: cause I know im missing something on it... besides color and shading... I RARELY color drawings...

[Ket Shi]

The head is really accurate, well done. However, its legs and feet seem a little out of proportion with the size of its head.

[Wark]

Mostly, it's oddly proportioned-- the scaling makes it look like you couldn't quite decide between a highly distorted view and a more "normal" one. The wing doesn't really make sense either-- where's it going? Where'd it start? How's it bent?

Good job doing the head right, though! I find it hard to remember all the quirks and details of any critter, especially if it has one or two I tend to fixate on at the expense of remembering all the others....

And there's no crime just doing line art. It's fan art, that you're doing for you. Nobody's going to come down with a hammer on you for leaving aside shading or color.

[Victorelle]

The head is really accurate, well done. However, its legs and feet seem a little out of proportion with the size of its head.

I see what you mean now!

Mostly, it's oddly proportioned-- the scaling makes it look like you couldn't quite decide between a highly distorted view and a more "normal" one. The wing doesn't really make sense either-- where's it going? Where'd it start? How's it bent?

well the wings were screwed up from when I took the screenshot for renferance and the bakc wing is supose to be ghostly and idk what happened to the other wing O.o

[Ket Shi]

If you're in need of reference pictures, may I suggest wowmodelview? Once you get it working, you can rotate and pose things any way you want.

[Victorelle]

If you're in need of reference pictures, may I suggest wowmodelview? Once you get it working, you can rotate and pose things any way you want.

naw cause I like to have just a picture not a 3D model cause it will easily confuse me...

[Bulletdance]

I think you did great! It looks awesome! The only thing I could suggest is try varying the thickness of the lines. Make the ones you want to stand out more a little thicker or darker, but its very well done.