My Journey as a hunter

[ServÅntos]

ok so i just started this and i would like to know what petopians to include, what beasts to include and just in general what u guys think so here's where im at so far constructive criticism is welcomed

"Hunters Log
Day 1,

My journey has just begun, I have seen many beasts all around me, but I haven’t decided exactly what beast I want to tame. I went to the local in to grab a brew with a couple of my friends, and we saw a wanted poster of a great white bear ”Bjarn, WANTED DEAD OR ALIVE REWARD, 10g” this was the one I was looking for. I pack up my bags and go out tracking Bjarn, after 12hrs of tracking I set up camp on the road that leads to Gol ‘Bolar Quarry. Suddenly I wake up in the middle of the night at the sound of wolves and Frost Trolls dying, I look outside and what do I see. Bjarn’s mauling them all I go to help the bear and I turns to strike and I just dodge it and continue shooting at the trolls Bjarn ignores me and continues to defend itself, I heal the bear and rap some bandages on his wounds. He seemed reluctant to let me that close but he didn’t attack me either. I go back to my tent and I hear foot steps behind me I turn and it’s Bjarn following me I look at him, pet him, and I walk along side him back to the tent. I feed him some wolf I had killed earlier as we sit by the fire."

[ServÅntos]

i edited it and will post more tomorrow.