Forever Loyal (Part two; POSTED! :D)

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Forever Loyal (Part two; POSTED! :D)

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So, I've recently retamed the best pets that I ever had on my main, Duma the cheetah and Bankotsu the Felpaw Wolf. I, of course, had to write a small fic about it! And needless to say, it ended up not being small at all! I only managed to get the first part done! But I'll deffinitely have the second part out in the next day or so. Anywho, here it is! Hope you all enjoy! :D


"Hey! Watch where you're goin'!" A large Tauren bull exclaimed as the Troll Huntress accidentally bumped into him, "Eep! Sorry!" She cried as she scuttled away from the angry bull, only to run straight into yet another Tauren, "Ack! The hell? Oh, Sand!!" She heard the Tauren gasp and she looked up to find herself face to face with a deep brown furred female Tauren, "Cau! Gosh, am I happy to see you!" Cau tilted her head "Why? Whats up?" The Troll, Huntress Zhou'Mai Sandfur, looked down at the ground, "Oh, you know, the usual. Been feelin' sad 'bout Duma and Ban-Ban again.." Sandfur sighed. "Is that all? C'mon Sand, you haven't seen them in over a year, its time to move on. I mean, look at the pets you have now! You have one of Har'Koa's kittens! And a ghost hydra! Tell me how many Hunters have those? Hardly any. And how many have cats and wolves? EVERYONE." Cau's ears twitched as she spoke. "I know that... But, those two had something special about them, you know?" She sighed again, "Well, I suppose this isn't helpin' any. I'm gonna head off to the Barrens, kay?" Cau grinned, "Haha, its always the Barrens with you, huh? Well, enjoy your trip to the worst place ever! Don't forget to get me a quilboar head!" Sandfur glared back at her friend, "Haha, very funny." And with that, she turned around and walked away, trying to avoid bumping into more people in the crouded valleys of Orgimmar.

"Come on, Fang, lets go." Sandfur said as she quickly mounted her black war wolf, who snarled happily, immediately taking off at a rythmic lope. They were out of the city now, and were traveling along beside the Southfury River, which seperated Durotar and the Barrens. Fang loped along, carrying his rider over the savanna with both speed and grace; akin to that of the young feline companion Sandfur had found years ago in this place, Duma the cheetah. She missed him dearly, after foolishly releasing him over a year ago. In fact, she couldn't even remember why she had done such a thing. The same could be said for her releasing her Felpaw Wolf, Bankotsu a few weeks before she had done so to Duma. The two of them had been her best friends, they had stayed with her when she had felt uttely devastated when one of her best friends had disappeared. But now the two best pets she had ever known were gone. Never to be seen again. Or at least, thats what she thought.

The sun was going down by the time Crossroards had started to come into view, but it wasn't the large Horde town in the middle of the Barrens that caught her interest. For she had noticed a small lithe figure among the large bulky lions that crouded around one of the trees. She had seen this shape before, in this exact spot. She reined in her wolf, dismounted and began to slowly creep towards the tree, trying not to draw the attention of the surrounding lions. Finally, she reached an area where she could see to the center of the pride; and tucked away in the sea of tawny cats was a small spotted feline who lay in a patch of green grass.

Sandfur knew who it was right away; the way he lay on the ground, the way his tail and ears twitched, the gleam in his eyes. There was no mistaking it; it was Duma!

Suddenly unaware of her surroundings, she lept up from her hiding spot and raced to the cheetah, ignoring the lions who chased her. "Duma!!" She called, causing the cat to raise his head in confusion. "Whaa? S-sandfur?! SANDFUR!!!" Duma jumped to his paws and launched himself at her, bowling her over and started to lick her face happily. "Duma! I thought I'd never see you again..." Duma's ears twitched "Really? Well, I always believed we'd meet again! I've always known you'd come back here to find me."

A loud snarl broke up their reunion as the lions crouded around them, hissing and roaring their anger at the intruder. Duma looked up, "Great, looks like we already have trouble! Oh well!" He jumped off of Sandfur and attacked the closest lion, raking it with his claws, causing it to race away, a large gash on its side, not wanting to get even more injured. A tremendous roar shook the ground as a giant pitch black lion stalked through the pride towards Duma. It was Humar the Pridelord. "Well what do you know, looks like we've caused enough trouble to get the attention of the Pridelord!" He twitched his tail, and watched calmly as the dark cat glared at him before leaping at him.

"Duma!!" Sandfur cried as the two felines lept at each other. Humar tried to rake his claws down Duma's flank but the lithe cat dodged with ease and quickly countered the attack by slashing at the black lion's muzzle. The Pridelord roared in defiance, again trying to rake Duma, and this time, his attacked landed, scoring large slashes across the sleek yellow pelt. Duma let out a pained screech, collasping onto the ground. Humar stood over him, ready to strike again, but before he could, an arrow lodged itself into his shoulder with a 'thok!'.

The black lion shrunk back from the pain, growling as he tried desperately to dislodge the sharp arrowhead that had peirced his flesh. The lions around the area cowered in fear before scurrying off as their Pridelord collasped from the pain. "DUMA!!!" Sandfur dropped her bow and arrow and ran to Duma's side, "Are you hurt?" Duma shook his head, trying to clear his vision. "Y-yeah, I'm fine" He shakily sat up and started figorously licking the slashes on his pelt.

"Oh Duma.. I'm so glad I found you again." Sandfur hugged the spotted feline, "Heh, I'm glad you found me too." Duma replied. Sandfur looked up at the sky, which had grown dark and had started sparkling with millions of glittering stars, "Well, its pretty late.. Wanna head back to the Crossroads?" Duma nodded, "Sure! Jeez, I haven't been there in forever..." "Heh, me neither..." Sandfur stood up and whistled for her wolf, Fang, who had been sleeping on the path the whole time, but woke up instantly and loped over to his master. "Hey Fang? Think you could carry Duma for me?" The big wolf leaned down and licked Duma, happy to see his old friend, and looked back up at Sandfur and barked loudly. Sandfur lifted Duma up onto Fang's back and grabbed the wolf's reins, leading him towards town.

"Hey Sand?" Duma's mew rang out in the night's silence, "Yeah?" Sandfur turned and looked at him. "Promise me we'll never be apart again, okay?" He looked up at her, eyes bright with both happiness and sorrow, "Of course Duma.. We'll never ever be apart, I promise you." Hugging him, she burried her face in his fur, trying to hide the tears that streamed down her cheecks. "Aaw, don't cry.. 'Kay? I don't want to see you cry over me." Duma licked Sandfur's shoulder, "D-duma... Alright, I won't cry anymore... " Looking up at the sky again, she added, "Together forever, the two of us. We'll be together forever."
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:3

Aw, it made me teary! I'm such a sap when it comes to the human(oid)/animal bond. Lovely story, I will be looking for Ban-Ban's next. :D

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Oh gad, this took forever! And jeez it is much longer than the first part! But I'm really happy with it! :D

And Rhyela, I'm glad you enjoyed it so much! Hope you'll like the second part just as much!



"Good morning Duma!" Sandfur yawned as she sat up in bed, looking up at the ceiling of the inn before turning to look at her cheetah, who slept on the floor beside her. He raised his head to stare up at her, "Same to you! So, what're we gonna do today? Go kick some Alliance butt, do some daily quests, or just kill random things?" He mewed, his head tilted. "Nope! I actually thought we'd go hang out in a few places we haven't been to in a while.. For old time's sake! Like Ghostlands.. Or--" Sandfur was cut off as Duma jumped up exitedly, "I wanna go to Felwood!!! We haven't been there in forever!!!" He raced to the door and sped out of the inn, "Duma!!" Sandfur quickly followed him, "What the heck was that about?" She asked as she caught up with him outside, "I told you, I wanna go to Felwood!!" She tilted her head at him, "Why? I don't see whats too special about that place. Filled with demons and stuff" She grimaced. Duma glared incredulously at her, "Yeah, but, theres other things there too! I can't believe you'd forget something like this and just pass it off as a dumb place!!" Sandfur stared back at him, "Wha? ... Oh ELUNE," She exclaimed, swearing loudly, "How in the Twisting Nether did I forget?!" Duma chuckled as his master flailed her arms around in the air as she realized her mistake, "So, are we going to Felwood or not?" He asked again. "Huh? Oh course we are! Let's go!!" Sandfur stopped waving her arms like an idiot and started to walk towards the stables to fetch her war wolf, Fang.

The sun blazed at it peaked above the rocky mountains of the Barrens, covering the already golden plains with bright light that turned the tall grass into shimmering seas of gold fronds. "Agh! It's too damn bright out here!!" Sandfur complained while sheilding her eyes from the sun, "Too used to the cold days of Northrend, huh Sand?" Duma grinned up at her. "Oh shut it you little scrap!" She laughed.

It wasn't long before the forests of Ashenvale came into view. Sandfur urged Fang to lope slightly faster, not being able to stand the blazing sun any longer. "C'mon Fang! Hurry up!" She dug her heels into the worg's side, causing him to yip and surge foward, "Much better!" She patted him on the neck. "Wow, Ashenvale, haven't been here in a while.." Duma commented as he ran along side Fang, his tail flicking back and forth as he dodged out of the way of the large worg's legs as he ran unstedily. "Oh jeez, what where you're going, you furball!" He stammed as he again dodged the flailing legs. Fang glowered at the cat beside him and slowed his pace slighty; they had reached Ashenvale.

A cool breeze blew through the trees as the worg and cheetah walked along the pathway. "It's just as gorgeous as I remembered it.." Duma breathed as he trotted along, "Hah, it may be pretty but it's still Night Elf territory. Well, mostly that is." Sandfur looked up at the sky, which seemed to glow above the treeline, "Well, Night Elf land or not, I still like it here." Duma paused. "Huh? What's up Dume-Dume?" His master questioned. "I dunno.. But I could have sworn I just heard howling." His ears twitched, "Oh come on, there's hundreds of wolves here! Not to mention the ones in Felwood too! We're bound to hear a lot of howling." She looked down at him, an amused look on her face. "Yeah yeah, I know. But.." "But what?" She raised an eyebrow, "But.. Oh nevermind! Come on!" Duma leapt into a lope and sped off down the trail again. "Hey! Wait for us!" Sandfur called after him as she urged Fang foward again.

"Well, here's the path to Felwood.." Sandfur paused as she stared down the trail to the demon-corrupted forest; "Let's go!" She called as Fang started loping again, Duma at his side. "Hey, Sand, do you think we'll see him?" Duma looked up at her, "Him? Him who?" She tilted her head, "GREAT ELUNE! You're being so freakin forgetful today! I'm wondering if we'll see--" He was cut off as they reached the border of the two forests, as a loud howl sounded from Felwood. "What in the world was that?!" Sandfur said as Duma crept toward the dead ground, sniffing it, "Eghhhh! This smells horrid!" He recoiled from it, "Then don't sniff it, idiot. Now come on, I wanna go see where that howl came from!" Sandfur chuckled at her cat and motioned for Fang to continue.




Ending it here or else it'll be too long to post >.>
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Aaaand, here's the rest! XD



The sound of snarls grew louder as Sandfur and her companions approached a large forboding tree. "Sounds like theres something fighting.. Something else." Duma commented as they grew closer to the sounds. As they rounded the tree they saw two diseased creatures, Felpaw Wolves, fighting each other. "Oh wow, Felpaws!" Duma exclaimed as the two rotting wolves leapt at each other, snarling as they tried biting the other's flank.

Sandfur stared at the smaller of the two wolves, it's wounds were much greater than it's opponent, two giant gashes, one in it's neck and the other in it's middle, which almost looked like it cut right through the wolf's body; but from the looks of it, the wounds were old, unlike that of the larger wolf, who's wounds were fresh and festering with disease. The smaller one threw itself at the other, bowling it over and burrying it's fang into it's neck. But before the small wolf could inflict too much damage, the large one threw it off, and lunged at it, tearing at flesh and bone. Sandfur couldn't dislodge her gaze from the fighting creatures, especially the smaller of the two. It's deep blue eyes flashing with fear as the larger wolf attacked it.

Drawing her bow and arrow, Sandfur quickly shot an arrow at the ground near the two fighting wolves, causing the large one to scramble away out of surprise. The blue-eyed wolf launched itself at it's attacker, biting down hard on it's shoulder. It stepped back as the other wolf collapsed onto the ground, dead. It howled triumphately before noticing that the other's death had not been from it's own attacks, but from an arrow lodged in it's throat. The wolf turned and stared at Sandfur, blue eyes blazing with rage. It leapt towards her, threatening to attack but was stopped as Duma jumped in front of it.

The wolf backed up slightly; it hadn't expected the cat to defend the Troll so readily. Though it had known about the Hunters of the world, and about their beast companions, it hadn't ever known that sort of thing... Or had it? The wolf growled, but stopped short as Duma returned with a loud snarl, but then silenced himself. He stared at the wolf, he could have sworn he'd seen the blue eyes that it had somewhere before... Could it be..? He turned to Sandfur, "Sand.. Doesn't this wolf remind of someone?" Sandfur was also staring at the Felpaw. "Yeah, it does.." She kept staring at it, trying to think. She had once had a Felpaw Wolf before, but she had released him not long after she step foot in Northrend. How could he have survived? And if he had, how could he have possibly gotten back to Felwood? But.. There was something about this wolf; the blue eyes, the wounds... They looked the same as her own wolf's had. Though she couldn't see the small purple cross marking that had been on her wolf's forehead; though that could have been explained by a large open wound of the wolf's head.

Sandfur slowly walked towards the wolf, who backed away further, growling. "Hey there little wolf.. I don't wanna hurt you, okay?" Sandfur cooed. The wolf stared up at her, it's blue eyes shining brightly. "Sand..? Do you really think it's him?!" Duma questioned as he watched his master and the wolf. He turned to face the Felpaw, "Hey, can't you speak?" He prompted, "If you really are Ban-Ban, talk!!" Duma pleaded.
The wolf stumbled back, shaking it's head. "I-i..." It stammered out, "He talked!" Duma cheered, bouncing up and down. Sandfur, still staring at the wolf, spoke up, "Bankotsu.. Is it really you?" The wolf looked at her, "Sandfur..?" he spoke again, "BAN-BAN!!!" Duma launched himself at the wolf, bowling him over, "ACK!! D-duma?" Bankotsu exclaimed as he was pinned down on the ground and licked over and over by the hyperactive cheetah.

"Oi Duma, you don't have to tackle him!" Sandfur laughed as she hugged the two of them. "Sandfur.. I never thought I'd see you again.." Bankotsu stared at her, blinking. "Heh.. Yeah, I never thought I'd see either of you again either." Sandfur sighed, "Huh? What do you mean either of us? What happened to Duma? I thought he continued traveling with you?" Bankotsu tilted his head with a questioning gaze. "He did, till...." Duma cut in, "Till she released me." Sandfur glared at him. "What?! You released him too?! But.. That doesn't make any sense at all!" Bankotsu gasped. Duma cut in again, "Yeah, she released me, but, as you can see, we found each other! Last night in fact! Now we're back to the way it used to be!! Especially now that we've found you!!" The cheetah hugged his friend again, causing the wolf to shrink away, blushing slightly. "Haha, you two are ridiculous!" Sandfur laughed, letting the two go and stood up.

"So, you two.. Wanna head back to Orgimmar?" Sandfur looked at her two best friends, "YEAH!!!" Duma bounced up and down, while Bankotsu nodded, "Sure! I haven't seen civilization in what seems like forever!" Sandfur turned around and whistled for Fang, who appeared from behind a tree, a small deer, which wasn't diseased so it had to have been from Ashenvale, in his jaws. "Alright guys, let's go!" Sandfur said as she hoisted herself onto Fang's back and urged him foward. Duma and Bankotsu followed.

"Hey Ban-Ban? Guess what?" Duma said as they walked, "What?" the wolf replied, "I'M SO HAPPY TO SEE YOU AGAAAAAAAAAAAAIIINNNNNN!!!~~" The cheetah glomped his friend again, tail waving around happily. "Argh! Duma! Jeez!" Bankotsu said, flailing around as Duma hugged him. "Well, one thing's for sure, things will never be dull around here again!" Sandfur chuckled as her two pets rolled around on the ground.

"And something else is for sure. We'll always be together, right guys?" "YEAH!" The two answered at the same time. Sandfur smiled at them, "Together forever. Always."



Also, over the night I also drew some pictures of some of my pets, so I'll probably make a topic for those later on today :D
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That's great. The only part I dont like is the ''Together forever'' part. Sounds slightly cheesy. Other than that, it's a great story.
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