I drew my hunter! <flail>

[Kirrandria]

Or rather, sort of. I sketched her. It was hard D:

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Took a good while to do, but I'm rather proud of it. A few parts still bug me, like the wolf's back left paw, so I was wondering if it were possible to get some crits or possibly redlines?

[Azunara]

*Whistles.*

Amazing. I love it!

You'll have to look to others for help though, I'm useless. xD

[Nimae]

That looks great, Kirrandria! I really like your lines along the muzzle, it's got that "I'm a wolf and I mean business" expression.

I don't know if this will help at all, you'll have to excuse my silly MS Paint job, but I took a look at the left (background) paw and made some simple red line edits. All I did really was just flesh out the underpad, so it had more of that rounded look like in your right (foreground) paw. I also changed the main top line, so that it connected with the third digit rather than the second. That just helped it look more substantial (if that's the right word).

http://oi56.tinypic.com/2h6vxp0.jpg

I hope this helps!

[nirvana]

That's gorgeous Are you planning on coloring it? I'd love to see a finished product.

[Chimera]

That is really fantabulious (i love my crazy words), everything looks really good and though my eye is untrained the overall body posture seems pretty spot on imo. Most ppl would have the arm thats pointing crooked downwards but how you turned the shoulder, its positioned pretty well

the critisism since you have asked for some, the arm i was mentioning seems a little warped. The elbow looks like its actually been severed, its how the curves just dive right in and bounce out as it flows to the rest of the arm towards the hand, if you perhaps crooked the end part of the arm (the part connecting to the hand, i really wish i knew human anatomy better lol) upwards just slightly (if your WoW's still running or you have WoWModelViwer, you can perhaps get some ideas off of the in-game female troll), it might look a little less akward

the line going up the thigh, i think that needs to be cut back a little, it seems too long since thats where the butt is

i do agree that the wolf's left back paw, its actually imo how you drew the shin. If you look at his right back leg its much more slender, i think thats all his back left shin needs, it seems like its thickening far too fast

i have yet to figure out how to make a fist or have the character im drawing hold something, it drives me absolutely nuts cause im terrible at hands so i really wish i could help you to figure out how to make it look like shes grasping her dagger/sword but i cant :< all i can really say is that it kinda looks like a jumble of fingers and the hilt.

I dont feel that it ruins the picture in any way if one doesnt nitpick at it (even after the nitpicking its still amazing to look at), its a very detailed and gorgeous piece and i really am amazed at all the little details and the fine netting you drew on her armor, how you positioned her body really gives it character too since all you can see of her face are those intense eyes glaring down her prey as shes commanding her wolf to attack, it doesnt make her appear 2D by having that position and the armor detailing, i see it and think that shes casting Hunter's Mark while at the same time with the body movement, silently telling her wolf that the thing shes pointing at is their prey and the wolf instantly begins to dash from behind her towards the target

[TygerDarkstorm]

I really love the way it looks, and I'm by no means a talented drawer, but your troll's feet look kind of skinny and tiny for a troll. Just something I noticed. Keep up the good work!

[Kirrandria]

Ehe, thank you all I finally fixed that paw, made it a bit thinner and such. I also see what you meant about the thigh, and tried to fix that. As for the arm, I made the top part a bit more flat ( I was looking at my arm and decided it needed that ). Otherwise, it's actually supposed to be turned a bit. Can't really see the line of her elbow cause the mail is covering it xD ). Otherwise, while I see the bottom part looks a bit off, I don't think that's impossible... I've got double jointed elbows myself, so I can bend them backwards ever so slightly X_x That, and I'm honestly not sure how I'd fix it. The feet have given me enough trouble, I'm not going to bother with them anymore!

[SgtMakkie]

Wonderful drawing

Now gief real WoW wolves that looked like that